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Blackened Heart...
Contributed by
mina-1
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:39:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Fallen settled amongst the cold floor
Devoured empty nothing left at the core
Once sat beautifully amidst loving hearts
Now broken sharded pieces wavered apart
Nestled deep serenaded by fear
Beckoned by self pity producing tears
Serenity of darkness swells the soul
Eternity subsistence heart charred like coal
Damaged frayed hanging by a thread
Elegy sung 'tis the heart that's dead
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:42:47 AM AEST
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Oh gosh... this is so sad..
What a terrible, yet brilliant poem...
There are some amazing images in this hun, and while I love them, I also hate them.
I hope this is not your heart you are talking about..
If you need me, I'm here.
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by Kie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:00:30 AM AEST
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This one brought tears to my eyes.
I remember when my heart was broken I felt like I had shattered into tiny shards of glass that I would never be able to put back together. It took five years. Those years seemed to pass in an agony of slowness.
But I found out somewhere along the way that a heart healing is similiar to losing a loved one who passes. We go thru all of these stages and eventually healing happens.
I also know the feeling when you feel like you have nothing inside of you, it feels like you're disassociated with your body and you go thru the motions of life like a zombie.
May you heal and find the love that you deserve, yes you deserve a great love.
You got to me with this one.
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by Jackee_line on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:07:17 AM AEST
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| Well expressed |
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:25:09 AM AEST
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A sad write one can only hope have faith 4
love finds u when u least exspect it . . .
Dorian Chambers
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:47:06 AM AEST
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Oh Sue..what a sad write...but you know what...all is not lost.
Somewhere, someday, you'll heal...and when you do...look out world!!!!
Hugs
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:59:23 AM AEST
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Mina
Losing love "walking out" Depression---that is a blacken heart. Sad and truthful write. I have been in that abyss that lonesome hell hole.
You explain it well.
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by pixie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:09:53 AM AEST
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very deep and emotional poem. *hugs* writren so well
take care hun,
pix xx
I am here if you need a friend
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 11:15:01 AM AEST
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I have a suspicion that "it" is even bigger than it appears here on the page. I'm guessing that even as you were writing this, you were thinking that no matter what you wrote... it somehow wouldn't be enough. It's impossible, I know, to capture something so overwhelming, so horrid, in words sometimes...
But, you did remarkably well! My! yes... you most certainly did. This is beautiful... and appropriately heartbreaking. *sigh* It hurts to read it, really.
Thinking lost love is one thing, but losing love is entirely another,
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:52:04 PM AEST
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Such a tragic piece!!!
Dark, dark sadness, so very painful.
Yet so well are these feelings conveyed that I can't help but say this is a very well written poem.
Awsome job! |
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 03:09:26 PM AEST
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All i can say is that this was such a hard poem to read.
It's emotively painful to read you're words, and the deep feeling you used where just amazingly heart felt.
Im sorry you had to go thrue this, i guess that what makes us into such stronger people.
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:25:10 PM AEST
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Sue,
What a deep, and emotional write, i feel you and hope the pain goes away. Dont give up on love...
Huggs
Leia |
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Re: Blackened Heart...
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by inoc on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 08:20:29 AM AEST
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mina-1
...written so powerful with strong pounding words..... hope the heart finds true love and lives happy!~
cheers!!~~ |
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