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Moonleaves
Contributed by
Sensommar
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Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:59:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I am here,
but my body is not.
Spring is here.
Everything is green, light-green.
I can see spring is here,
but I cannot feel it.
My body covered
with dark-green moonleaves,
longing for the soil
that once was mine.
I am here,
but my life is not with me.
Copyright ©
Sensommar
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2005-04-02 02:59:19]
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Re: Moonleaves
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 06:03:39 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written yet heartwrenching write. Great imagery. Nice work. |
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Re: Moonleaves
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by Kie on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 06:58:09 AM AEST
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Quite poetic and it really touched my heart.
I loved the title.
Kie |
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Re: Moonleaves
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 07:49:19 AM AEST
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| A sad lost feeling. Well conveyed for so short a piece. |
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Re: Moonleaves
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 08:07:26 AM AEST
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I love those end lines. They hit me more than anything else in the poem.
A geat write, full of emotion.
Phil |
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Re: Moonleaves
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:06:45 AM AEST
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I agree with Kie on this one, this was really poetic.
A well writen piece.
Jane |
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Re: Moonleaves
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 09:20:15 PM AEST
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Your poem is like looking into a mirror I love your anoligy(i cant spell) If you even need someone to talk to Im here!
XOXOXJill |
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Re: Moonleaves
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 02:23:41 AM AEST
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Luv the title.
A very fresh concept.
A bit sad but great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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