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A Bracelet of Blood
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:55:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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my arm stained so red,
stained from blood and relief
a blood covered bracelet wraps itself around my arm
the bracelet acts as a dam that stops the blood from breaking through to the pale skin on the other side
the blood keeps coming and doesnt seem to stop,
it breaks through and drifts to the other side
soon my whole arm is covered in blood
soon the blood begins to drip on the floor
and soon the blood begins to cover the entire bracelet
this blood covered bracelet will be stained forever
this blood covered bracelet will never be the same
with all of the stains on my blood covered arm,
the ones that cover my bracelet will haunt me forever
this blood covered bracelet will be my last reminder
of how i felt in this time of need
Copyright ©
humboldtsweetie33
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2005-04-01 16:55:45]
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Re: A Bracelet of Blood
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by BEBE on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:04:55 PM AEST
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Great write... It has so much feeling
Keep up the good work, i would lie to read more of your work
GODBLESS
BEBE |
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Re: A Bracelet of Blood
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:29:21 PM AEST
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| ooo. this is a good poem! sounds a bit like mine, actually. I definitely like it, especially the pictures of ur bracelet... |
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Re: A Bracelet of Blood
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by Urizen on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:49:21 PM AEST
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| Tragic, gruesome, filled with emotion, written from the heart, a very good poem. |
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Re: A Bracelet of Blood
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 07:28:59 PM AEST
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wow....very poweful poem! well done, truly great work
i love the title "A Bracelet of Blood" very nice imagery. plz keep writing
all my hopes n luv x |
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Re: A Bracelet of Blood
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:40:02 AM AEST
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The flow was ok, it could use a little editing here and there. but i found this really good.
Jane |
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