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I May
Contributed by
Elf
on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:29:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Day by day
and week by week
I hide my thoughts
I refuse to speak.
I may smile.
At least I try.
But deep inside
I always cry.
I may laugh
or so it seems.
But you can't hear
my anguished screams.
I may rejoice
with in your sight,
But in my mind
Rages a fight.
I may look
completely sane.
But you can't see
my constant pain.
Copyright ©
Elf
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2005-04-01 16:29:43]
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Re: I May
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by Kellros on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:43:34 PM AEST
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| I liked this one, can relate. |
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Re: I May
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by BEBE on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:08:39 PM AEST
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I can relate to you some perfectly. Great write.
GODBLESS
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Re: I May
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 07:32:47 PM AEST
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this is a heartbreaking poem....but an excellent job and i can truly relate to some of ur thoughts.
i especially luv the last line
i hope ur hard time will pass
all my hope |
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Re: I May
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 03:58:11 AM AEST
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I could feel this write . I know how it feels to struggle with crazed thougths. I like how you put your words down on paper.
Whisper |
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