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I Want You
Contributed by
BEBE
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Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:24:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I want to hold you in my arms
give you my loving care
Where are you?
What have they done with you?
I want your arms wrapped around my knee caps.
I miss you Honey.
I wish you were here.
Im sorry I neglected you.
I wont do it ever again, I promise you.
Do you miss me too?
I dont even have a clue.
I will draw pictures with you.
I will play pattycake with you.
I want to teach you.
Josey I need you.
We will play guess who.
I will teach you how to dance, just like you have always wanted me to do.
I just want you back.
I will give anything, and evrything
just to have you in my arms.
Copyright ©
BEBE
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2005-04-01 16:24:03]
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Re: I Want You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:45:18 PM AEST
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| Wow....heartwrenching write... |
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Re: I Want You
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by humboldtsweetie33 on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:09:54 PM AEST
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that is so sad. great emotion. very nice. wow. thank you for commenting on my poem. it really does mean a lot to me. if u want to read the rest of mine, just search for my user name humboldtsweetie33 it should come up. thanks a lot
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Re: I Want You
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by blowfish_jane on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:45:51 AM AEST
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Such an emotive write, well done on writing such a good poem.
Hugs,
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