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Nothing
Contributed by
BEBE
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Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:06:31 PM in AEST
Topic:
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As I sit here thinking
about what Im going to do next
I think really hard........
But it is just to complex.
Im lost. I have nothing. No where to go.
As I look far into the sky
I think how high, I could possibly fly.
Feeling free, wind blowing through my hair.
Just not to give one care.
REALITY CHECK
Not possible, can i ever feel free?
Can I justt relax? Can I ever be normal?
NO! Feeling these feelings is impossible.
I have given up.
( If feeling these feelings was possible than that means the whole world would be sain)
Copyright ©
BEBE
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2005-04-01 16:06:31]
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Re: Nothing
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by Vistar on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:23:45 PM AEST
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| Woah. Great poetry. It really expresses your inner emotions, I can tell. |
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Re: Nothing
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:35:53 AM AEST
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WHAT A BEAUTIFUL PEICE OF POETRY IT'S
CONCEPT IT SO HONEST AND U WEAVE AN
HONEST PICTURE LIKE A LOST BUT RARE
WORK OF ART . . .
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Re: Nothing
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by Sinned on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 09:31:29 PM AEST
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Strong write
Freedom is spirit it is helping others
it is the giving of ourselves for the greater good og God.
"What ever you d for the leastof these you do for Me" Jesus Crist
You have good ideas keep writing.
Sinned
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Re: Nothing
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by Mallard8 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:22:57 AM AEST
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That was deep... has a different meaning to every person I think....
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Re: Nothing
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by Mallard8 on
Thursday, 22nd December 2005 @ 02:22:57 AM AEST
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That was deep... has a different meaning to every person I think....
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