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Unmended

Contributed by yesi on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 03:45:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Thinking back,
on what I did,
I shouldn't have done it,
I shouldn't have broken it off,
I was at a state of denial,
I denied that I loved you,
but I was scared of it,
so I ran off,
now I regret it,
but I can't do anything about it now,
and I can't tell you how I feel,
I messed us up,

You look so happy now,
like you've forgotten that we ever were,
that's why I don't want to say anything,
I don't want to kill your mood,

So now I'm left broken hearted,
my heart unmended,
as I stare and think of you,
wondering what more we could have been,
now it's too late,
too late to realize what I had.

Copyright © yesi ... [ 2005-04-01 15:45:44]
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Re: Unmended (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 12:02:39 PM AEST
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I liked the reason of this poem and the theme of it, though it didn't flow too well. I really like what you wrote here, however;

You look so happy now,
like you've forgotten that we ever were,
that's why I don't want to say anything,
I don't want to kill your mood,

That is the worst feeling to go through. It is so much pain. You want to gather up all of your tears and drown the person in them. You only want to show them that they really do mean a lot to you. You want to show that the break up has caused pain. You're screaming inside wondering if he/she ever did feel the way that you do. Does that make sense? Well, I really like the message and the feelings you expressed in this write.

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