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Felicity in Life

Contributed by unbreakable on Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:47:04 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

In these eighteen short years that I've been alive
I think I've experienced more than my share
this is not another depressing poem, Baby
I am moving on...I just need to get there

So here's the part where I say to you
"My sadness, my suffering will never end,
I am weak and I will thrive on your pity,
why, oh, why have I been condemned?"

I don't think so, not this time and never again
I don't want anyone's pity, I am who I am
and I love the person that I've become
so if they don't like it, I don't give a damn

I may not have had the chances they did
but all the opportunity's here now with me
I won't hold back because I am strong
My life is good and I know you can see

My favourite thing about you is that
you love me for me, even with my flaws
you know I'm not perfect, but you don't care
seeing every inch of me as I am, as I was

Everyday the sun will shine a little brighter
And every second that passes, I'll stand more high
Seeing ever more clearly felicity in life
knowing you'll be beside me by and by

Copyright © unbreakable ... [ 2005-04-01 14:47:04]
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Re: Felicity in Life (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 10:53:58 PM AEST
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I loved how this opened and closed, and all the in-between. A nice sense of contentment at the beginning, and then it picks up into a new source of happiness that just kinda overflows, and it's always nice to see these kind of writes when handled as well as you did with this one. Great poem, once again.

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