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*Mask*
Contributed by
write_whenit_hurts
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Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 03:55:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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So hide your face with that mask
the mask that hides your tears
Do the unbearable task
try not to show any of your fears
Use the mask which hides your soul
So no one can see the person you are
you know you can never be whole
Praying for someone to be your shining star
What's the use of lying?
Everyone wears one even if you don't know
You spend hours awake crying
And the effect of the mask isn't slow
So wear your mask that hides your heart
Sometimes you're the only one whos mask needs a smile
Praying for your life can be a start
Since lying in a casket may take a while
So hide your face with that mask
The mask that hides your tears
The mask that hides your soul
The mask that hides your heart
The mask that hides the real you
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Re: *Mask*
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by sean88 on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:28:48 AM AEST
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Its a really good poem! I've been there before and i know that when people don't seem to know the real you, it gets to you. Just hold your head up and never change who you are and maybe,hopefully people soon will know the real you.
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Re: *Mask*
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:48:18 PM AEST
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| I know exactly how you feel, even the people who think they know me best don't know me at all, becaause of my mask. very good poem, but i think u tried a bit too hard to rhyme. 4/5 |
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Re: *Mask*
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:41:37 AM AEST
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Interesting write. I can remember feeling just in those words.
Whisper |
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