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bunny or coyote
Contributed by
brokengirl
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Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 01:50:30 AM in AEST
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A teeny tiny bunny rabbit
Cute as a button
He jumps around without a care
He has no idea what’s about to happen.
An ugly mean coyote
Unwanted by everyone
Pounces on the little bunny
And kills all his fun
Figure out who you are
Are you the cute little bunny?
Don’t have a care in the world,
But end up in a coyote’s tummy.
Or are you the coyote
Mean, unwanted and ugly
You may have no friends
But at least you’re not hungry.
Copyright ©
brokengirl
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2005-04-01 01:50:30]
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Re: bunny or coyote
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by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:35:14 AM AEST
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Hmmm...Hybred.....Tid bit of both..just depending on the time and place...this is really a cool thought poem and I hope you understand as long as it means something to you then there really is no point to care what others think....good luck
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Re: bunny or coyote
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by loveisendless on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:46:51 AM AEST
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SOUNDS LIKE A SELFISH PERSON WHO PREYED ON THE KINDNESS & THEIR INNOCENSE TO PLEASE HIMSELF! A COYOTE WHO TOOK SOMETHING THAT SOMEONE DIDN'T WANT HIM TO HAVE!! NO MATTER IF HE FEELS SORRY ABOUT IT OR NOT,HE STILL GOT WHAT HE WANTED!!! AN
OUT SPOKEN POEM ABOUT A SELF TRAGEDY,NICELY WRITTEN TOO!!!!
DAN!!!!! |
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Re: bunny or coyote
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by mylady on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:21:19 AM AEST
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coyote got to eat at least the rest of the bunnys are safe .
The poem was nice and well written .. |
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Re: bunny or coyote
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 10:23:50 AM AEST
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| something on which to ponder. |
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Re: bunny or coyote
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 10:08:50 PM AEST
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| Very thought provoking write. I throughly enjoyed this. Excellent work. |
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Re: bunny or coyote
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by rikkijade on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 04:08:29 PM AEST
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| different than what I am used to reading I like the true meaning in it |
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Re: bunny or coyote
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:21:23 AM AEST
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Hunger is by far not the greatest of yearnings the soul feels. A satisfied soul needs more than just food. Friends are far better than most anything on this world.
Well written, interesting piece.
Take care.
David |
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