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I CUT!!!!
Contributed by
life_goes_on900
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Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 01:26:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I cut to get all my pain away
I cut to call it a day
I cut becouse I cant stop
I cut to make me feel like im on top
I cut becouse of what you did to me
I cut becouse you cant see
I cut even though I get worse
I cut becouse its my only source
I cut even though I have to hide
I cut becouse im hurting inside
I cut while people wonder why
I cut becouse I just want to cry
I cut while people talk behind my back
I cut everynight beforee I hit the sack
I cut even though im running out of space
I cut just to hear my heart pace
I cut even though I promise not to
I cut becouse I dont know what else to do
I cut and wsh people wouldnt worry
i cut and hope they dont feel sorry
I cut becouse I want to bleed
I cut becouse I have that need
I cut becouse of what you said
I cut becouse I feel dead
I cut becouse I cant be strong anymore
I cut even though im always sore
I cut even though its so much pain
I cut becouse there's only so much hurt I can contain
I cut becouse it makes me feel good
I cut becouse I think I should
I cut becouse I blame myself completly
I cut becouse it feels so easy
i cut myself becouse theres never been anything good in my life
I cut becouse I cant let go of this bloody knife.................
sorry its long. I hope u liked.plz comment!!!!!
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Re: I CUT!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by brokengirl on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 01:57:11 AM AEST (User
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wow i like this one..i can relate to it completely so it "speaks" to me. Good job and hope u feel better soon
*hug*
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Re: I CUT!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAlone on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:44:04 AM AEST (User
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Most super repeditive poems get annoying and boring....yours did'nt though...I use to cut....Not exactly something im proud of...but I hope you get better soon and good luck to ya
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Re: I CUT!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by poison_touch666 on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 03:17:16 AM AEST (User
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untill you can find a new way to vent the pain i guess you'll keeep continuing to do this, just know it's not the only way. |
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Re: I CUT!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 08:02:25 AM AEST (User
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pained write, I cut also so this poem was very real to me. well expressed poem of your sadness
pix xx |
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Re: I CUT!!!!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 04:59:05 AM AEST (User
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I was taken by this poem coz I reliaze why some people do cut themselves. And the words you used in your write pretty much nails it. Good write There were feelings expressed with each line. Its sad but its true, all the reasons you mentioned , is why most lost souls reaching out do.
Good write.
Whisper |
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