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Closer
Contributed by
SelrinAngel23
on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 12:55:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Closer you come
Farther I stay
You need to see
That I want you away
If you don't leave me alone
I will stop this madness on my own
To have it my way
I will take your life
So you can never come closer again
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SelrinAngel23
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2005-04-01 00:55:49]
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Re: Closer
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 01:29:22 AM AEST
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this was short and very angry felt.. I know this feeling well.. if its based on someone you are mad at I hope they stay away cuz i know i get annoyed when certian parties of people i am angry with don't get the hint.. Great write
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Re: Closer
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by brokengirl on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 02:00:33 AM AEST
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i can feel the anger in this poem. good write. I hope the person u want to stay away does because I know how u feel when people just keep hangin around and u just want them to go away. People dont seem to get the hint.
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Re: Closer
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by rikkijade on
Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 12:49:21 AM AEST
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This is great I can never seem to express myself in so few words, I love it!!!!
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