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Still Alive
Contributed by
SelrinAngel23
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:12:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Through the quiet of my heart I could hear you
You were silent but still alive
Everything you said gave me hope
You were calm but still alive
It touched me by every word you spoke
You were gone but still alive
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SelrinAngel23
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2005-03-31 22:12:48]
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Re: Still Alive
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by BrokenAngel on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:26:04 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem for it to be your first. Keep up the good work, you'll only get bettter in time. :-)
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Re: Still Alive
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by Live2Die on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 12:09:37 AM AEST
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| Awesome poem, I really really liked it. Keep writing |
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Re: Still Alive
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by undeniable2003 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 11:45:08 AM AEST
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| Ths is a beautiful and touching poem. You are obviously very talented. |
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