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Dancer In the Dark
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:28:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I saw a dancer in the darkness
A silhouette 'neath moon's dim light
Her image casting faintest shadows
as if a ghost within the night
Nocturnal silence did abound
all still but for the gentle breeze
a haunting whisper to my ears
that spoke to me through barren trees
Her breath, a fog from winters chill
as stardust sparkled on her face
I watched in awe as she did twirl
in flowing gown of silk and lace
She calls to me and I am hers
a helpless captive to her charms
but reaching out to dare to hold
she vanishes within my arms
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:59:44 PM AEST
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Very picturesque, Larry....
Love it...
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:38:49 PM AEST
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BRAVO LARRY, LOVE THAT LAST LINE,
GREAT 2 SEE U BACK . . . |
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:43:17 PM AEST
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OOPS! LOL 4 GOT 2 PUT MY NAME LIKE U
U WOULDN'T KNOW WHO IT WAS LOL
XTRA KUDOS . . .
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by DorianChambers on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:45:27 PM AEST
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DORIAN CHAMBERS . . . THERE, MUST BE
THOUGHS DRINKS I HAD IN THE HOOD
LOL . . . WELCOM BACK . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 12:47:58 AM AEST
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exquiste larry, as always, your pen is truely golden as is your heart:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 01:12:45 AM AEST
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dude yer back! What an awesome poem
man I was held captive by the imagery in this
wonderful piece. Anyways it is good to see
you back and I hope and trust that you are
doing well.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 04:55:57 AM AEST
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wow beautiful.
and welcome back rakerman. |
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 07:52:00 AM AEST
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Ahhhhhhh and there it is.... another shining example of Larry's beautiful, romantic poetry!
This piece seems especially tender... the first stanza, of course, in particular. Tender enough... that I was pulled right in and then knocked right over by those last two lines. *sigh*
Pitter pattering,
~SNM~ |
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by pixie on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 08:06:06 AM AEST
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wow that was wonderful Larry, I see your time away has made your poems seem even more special than they were last time around :):) amazing and beautiful
pix xx |
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 09:46:11 AM AEST
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How nice to see you back Larry. I have missed reading your poems.
You painted many beautiful images with your golden words. The picture was so lovely of your dancer in the dark. Music would have been fantastic to add the finishing touch. A sound like a musical box would have been sublime.
Love Angelxxxx
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by xXx_lil_pyro_xXx on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 11:42:20 AM AEST
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beautifuly written! nothing but praise!
~karis~ |
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by ever1der on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:01:44 AM AEST
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posted a year ago and I never read it..wow; would you believe that??? and here I am begging you to write..sheesh! This is perfect..rhyme, subject..everything a person could want. Now just some good wine and a fireplace..softly falling rain and someone to cuddle with..
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Re: Dancer In the Dark
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th October 2007 @ 01:08:33 AM AEST
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A mysterious and enchanting poem,great rhythm and rhyme.I've read much of your poetry today,and very much enjoyed the visit.Your work has an essential ingredient.......heart.
Den |
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