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One Sided Love (revised)
Contributed by
o7neves
on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:28:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She’s cool, she’s calm, collected
The one that I unfortunately selected
Why was my heart left so unprotected?
Eyes that make me cry
Lips that make me smile
She is everything and seductive
Making me in every which way so unproductive
Why do I care so much?
Yearning only for her touch
Every time I see her I get such a rush
So connected, so close, I cry
At the sight of a tear dropping from her eye
When that happens I want to die
The need to have her hold me tight
My heart demanding she stay throughout the night
When will it give up this never ending fight?
My heart breaks in half
Only to know it was her I never had
My wanting won’t ever go away
As long as I can’t have her, it won’t ever fade
Almost like something someone had forbade
Physically she can disappear
But in my mind she’ll always appear
That of course is my greatest fear
She’s my subconscious obsession
Wishing her to want to be in only my possession
I think it’s time I sat down at a therapy session
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Re: One Sided Love (revised)
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by LaDyD on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:03:58 PM AEST
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| That was beautifully written....very touching I enjoyed it a lot!!!! |
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Re: One Sided Love (revised)
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by CurtisC on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 01:25:25 AM AEST
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i still like it just as much as before, it's not too different but the changes you made definitely add to the piece just that much more, keep em comin dear ;)
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Re: One Sided Love (revised)
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by Spazzo on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 10:37:20 PM AEST
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This is still really beautiful hehe.
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Re: One Sided Love (revised)
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by chanceof_promise on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 08:43:56 PM AEST
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| great write |
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