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Left Behind
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:20:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The glimps of hope is gone
Faded slowly away
As the sirens sing their song
Left nothing but misery
Just me all alone
In a life of agony
All it does is degrade
What a place of nothing
Raining on my parade
Suicide crosses my mind
What an ease to me
As death is truly not defined
Forever I am condemed
As long as I live
My life of ruthless grim
I can try all I will
It all stays the same
Like the ink black on the quill
The fire will die
and life will break
And there is no reason for me to lie
...
As I am happy
And I do not care
For I left it all behind
...
For you my angel is now here
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-03-31 21:20:04]
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Re: Left Behind
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:35:36 PM AEST
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oh my gosh....this was an awesome write...uvve captured ur sense of despair very well. wow
i love the first stanza...amazing
i hope ur hard time will pass
all my hope n dreams x
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Re: Left Behind
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:06:28 PM AEST
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| =] the no child left behind act crossed my mind and how stupid it is. hold everyone back just for one person, or the no person left behind in combat. in one situation 9 people died just to bring someone back. but anyway, im glad that all of those things are left behind, but keep enough around for the cowrite =] excellent post by the way, ive missed them, as ive missed even reading poetry for 3 days in general. |
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Re: Left Behind
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 01:42:40 AM AEST
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wow this is awesome.. I love the way you write.. I can relate to this.. keep writing.. I love the stuff you write..
JENNI |
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