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Lost Sight
Contributed by
shatteredreflection
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:03:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Floating through the starry sky
Searching for my home
I'm lost in this dark oblivion
Traveling alone
Consumed by darkness
But yet the lights fly by
My sight is blinded
For visions they deny
Few bursts of color
Mostly shades of black
Sight's almost gone
There's no getting it back
I'll be lost forever
And will never find where I belong
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2005-03-31 21:03:20]
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Re: Lost Sight
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:46:11 PM AEST
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this is a very powerful poem and i really enjoyed reading it.
its very dark but amazing. well done
all my hope n dreams x |
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Re: Lost Sight
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 08:13:53 AM AEST
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| this is a good one. i like the feeling of free floating throughout. Keep the great work. |
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