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emotional homicide
Contributed by
shatteredreflection
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:58:11 PM in AEST
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Zoning out, hearing nothing you say
I scream for you to go away
Words are like knives, they cut so deep
Mentally through my skin I watch the blood seep
A few minutes pass by then I see
There's a puddle of blood beneath me
But now it's too late, there's no turning back
You killed my soul, I'm emotionally black
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2005-03-31 19:58:11]
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Re: emotional homicide
(User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:02:14 PM AEST
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awesome, this is such a powrful poem
especially the ending...i stopped breathing for a second
well done, keep it up |
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Re: emotional homicide
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by sicknivesevered on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:25:30 PM AEST
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| Great write. (^_^)v |
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Re: emotional homicide
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by mylady on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:38:44 AM AEST
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| Sad poem ..nice written |
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