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Please, Let Me Go
Contributed by
Evilnn
on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:03:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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To end my time with bone and flesh
Without doing harm to another
To stand alone last waking breath
Only to leave a weeping mother
The only reason I'm still here
Is for you- My family and friends
Don't want to cause you any tears
But I truely wish it all would end
I'm angry because I can't leave
Would you let me go
If I begged you "Please"
I can no longer stand the pain
You say it's all in my head
But I feel it in my veins!
Please, Please, Let me go
I'm only here for you
I know that I'm not that old
But I feel its overdue
I know we don't see eye to eye
But if you knew of my pain within
You'd see that I've already died
Therefore, it would not be a sin
My soul died many years ago
So you see, Its okay to
LET ME GO!!
Copyright ©
Evilnn
... [
2005-03-31 19:03:55]
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Re: Please, Let Me Go
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by shelby on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:10:19 PM AEST
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emotional and honest your brought forth you emotions to the reader a great write
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Re: Please, Let Me Go
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:59:35 PM AEST
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wow...this is very sad but you've written an excellent piece.
and its all so true...we live for other people thats why we keep going, even if we are dead inside
i loved this piece, keep writing and keep living
all my hope x |
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