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Back Away
Contributed by
LayDownPlayDead
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Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 07:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Constantly you bring me down, further and further I fall into your delicately planned trap. Mesmerized by your gentle stare, I won't let go. Your sweet voice fills my mind of days gone by. Everyday I fall deeper and you laugh harder. There's so much to be said but no words in which to it. I'd sell my soul just to be closer to you, I'd bargain with death to see your face for just one more minute. Your words are so cruel but I won't let my heart hear the things you say. There isn't anything I wouldn't do just to taste your lips, the warmth of your touch. Getting close and backing away is your game. You back away and I keep falling.
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Re: Back Away
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by OreO on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 02:26:56 AM AEST
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This is so sad...i can relate to what this feels like all to well...it's very painful...i hope your not really going through this type of pain.....thanks for sharing it...
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Re: Back Away
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 03:11:07 AM AEST
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This is harsh... I've been there like I think we all have. Its hard when ppl do this to us, but u can get through it trust me on that one. Good poem
- Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Back Away
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:37:38 PM AEST
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| So sad but yet so good. Very nicely written. I hope your going to be okay. |
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Re: Back Away
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by PerfectlyDead666 on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:22:43 PM AEST
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| these is even better |
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Re: Back Away
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 08:43:19 PM AEST
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| written with pure knowledge, and talent. loved it! |
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