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i pray for your soul,your out of control
Contributed by
blackholesun
on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:38:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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start your *****,throw a fit ,
someday you will be burning in the pit,
go ahead and play your games,
you know who you are i dont gotta say names,
your living in sin,
no one is your friend,
i cant wait till the end,when u fall then you will see god standing tall,
i hope u repent ,all the anger you have spent,
i laugh at you in shame,
but no matter how i pray your heart is the same,
i was gonna be nice but your soul is just ice,
as if you ever made a sacrifice,
nothing will ever make you happy,
seeing others in joy makes you feel crappy,
all your pity trips are so damn sappy,
why cant you leave well enough alone,
jesus is frowning on you from his throne,
when you're regretting an eternity in hell,
i hope you like the smell of your flesh burning,
because then for revenge you wont be yearning,
you will look and see god's back turning.
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Re: i pray for your soul,your out of control
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 05:35:53 PM AEST (User
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This should have been put under humorous
poetry, cause I laughed so hard. Several lines I must point out here that caught my evil eye. LOL "your living in sin" well, you would know about that one. "my soul is ice", is that for being an "Icequeen"? and this line really got me laughing "as if you ever made a sacrifice" what on earth do you know about making sacrifices, your 19 years old, never had a job and mooch off other people. You are such a riot! "nothing will make you happy" must be speaking of yourself here, everyone knows how unhappy you are, just have to go read that stuff you print here that you call poetry. "all your pity trips are so damn sappy" This is from the girl who used to come crying to me with all her sad woes. Boo Hoo. It seems without realizing it...you've written a poem about yourself. Oh and by the way I left a comment cause I noticed no one had anything to say. Damon and I are wondering when you suddenly got religion? I thought you said you were wiccan, atheist, and into vampirism? Does your god know what your up too. LOL Wish I'd read this one before, I'd been missing a good laugh all this time. Laura |
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