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Death on Earth
Contributed by
diamond_tears
on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:28:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The page is blank,
Like me.
Everything has been erased.
Everything is nothing.
Drowning in my own fear,
I let myself be buried,
Beneath the sand of my mind.
I want to breathe,
To feel the oxygen of life,
Fill my empty body,
But it rejects me.
I can’t seem to see past,
The scars in my eyes.
Blinding me,
From the happiness I’ll never see.
Curling up,
I sit in the dark,
And wait.
Lying lifeless in my pit,
Tears dribble down my face.
I hit myself,
To make me feel.
But still,
I’m numb.
Nothing is real.
Release me from this emptiness,
This pain,
This nothing,
This death on earth.
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diamond_tears
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2005-03-31 17:28:20]
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Re: Death on Earth
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:37:53 PM AEST
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sad poem... i'm sorry you feel this way... it can't be easy...
great write...
hope to c more from you soon
Jishes |
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Re: Death on Earth
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by x0x_lorlor on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:42:57 PM AEST
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| damnn that's really deep.. you've portrayed your feelings well in this poem.. really well written =) |
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Re: Death on Earth
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by blackholesun on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:43:35 PM AEST
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| hey,im sorry you feel like that ive been there,it really sux i know and it always seems like nothing will get better but eventually it does,there must be a reason you feel so empty,i dont know if u believe in god but it never hurts to pray,you will be in my prayers,and i hope you have a friend to love you..if not then ill be your friend my yahoo name is bioch6662003 my aol name is brittstoner,i liked the poem but i dont like anyone to feel empty and in pain,i hope your not suicidal>luv britt |
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Re: Death on Earth
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:16:29 PM AEST
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| wow, that was pretty deep...I enjoyed every line, you're and excellent writer and this is an excellent poem...I'm sorry you're feeling like this though...I really liked this poem though, it was amazing...great work...God bless |
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Re: Death on Earth
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by True-to-the-Heart on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 09:44:13 AM AEST
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| This pain is intense.. |
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