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Fidelity
Contributed by
ScottOne
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Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 07:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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There is a home upon my lands.
Then, younger, strong, well-formed, and quaint
A smaller structure also stands
To hold such toys as saw and paint.
I always spend my nights at home.
It's where I keep my bed.
And ever should my wife say "Go!",
I wouldn't choose that shed.
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ScottOne
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2002-12-20 19:20:00]
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Re: Fidelity
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by OreO on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 02:22:59 AM AEST
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Wow i feel it fits all 3 topics!!! This is beautifully written, thanks for sharing this one.....welcome to YPDC Scott, i look forward to reading more of your poetry....
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Re: Fidelity
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by ScottOne on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 12:22:30 PM AEST
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Thanks for the feedback.
My particular concerned was that the good home/good woman
metaphor was too subtle, but it seems that you caught it.
Thanks again.
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Re: Fidelity
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 11:59:47 AM AEST
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| short but to the point, welcome to ypdc |
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Re: Fidelity
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:35:00 PM AEST
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| Nice write very good. |
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