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Living
Contributed by
brokensoul
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:16:42 PM in AEST
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being torn down so broken and twisted
ive fallen ive died
but something or someone brought me back to life
something shifted
changed me for life
lifted a large amount of weight off my shoulders
erased the film covering my eyes
now i see i was lying to myself
i thought i was okay
but i wasnt living
my life was drained
now im living
now i see the ones who truely love me
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2005-03-31 15:16:42]
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Re: Living
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:21:25 PM AEST
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I was drawn here by your comment on the poem - and knowing what kind of love it takes, I am glad you have that in your life.
It all starts from here
mj |
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Re: Living
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by poison_touch666 on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:22:52 PM AEST
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| i'm glad that you feel able to see, its horrible to find that what you onced believed was a sham |
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Re: Living
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by cerrora on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:47:51 PM AEST
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| wow your good i wish i were that good i have only been writing poems for like three months now and most say i am asome i dont think i am but you your great like wow lol it really touched me amasing |
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Re: Living
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by tx_graffiti_gal on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:14:39 PM AEST
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| God loves you... Never gives up on us. Will always be there.. ask him..... So glad that your doing better. Beautiful poem. |
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