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Immortality And Vanity

Contributed by Fafnir on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:23:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Dark is my path
black is my soul
my heart remains bold
angels fly
encircling me with their songs and beauty
demons cry, from the depths of the abyss
the road I must follow is long and winded
creeping all the way down
to the pits of the dark
to the deepest abyss
all the way down...
down to the Nine Lords Of Hell
black is the path to eternal life
dark are the hearts craving for it
God, refused me and threw me out of Heaven
Satan did not wish to grant my immortality either
damned and broken I return to my home
despairing and trembling in anger
why do they deny me!?
WHY!?!?
through fire and ice
I have wandered in vain
for my own vanity
I cannot bear to see my face age
and my body grow weak and wrinkled
this long hair turned grey many years ago
but not beacause og my age
great is the cost
impossible price I must pay
to remain young eternally
but it is necessary...
a thousand of virgins must be sacrficed
on a waning moons night
the blood I must drink before sunrise...

Copyright © Fafnir ... [ 2005-03-31 14:23:02]
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Re: Immortality And Vanity (User Rating: 1 )
by poison_touch666 on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:27:25 PM AEST
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hmm, sounds slightly like the basic plot to a kind of thriller movie at the end, like it though, strange and kinda reminds me of things in a weird way..

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