Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	22-November 13:32:07 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

The Look

Contributed by heartquake on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 01:20:03 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

(Me) I love how your eyes dance like ballerinas
(You) I love how your eyes can't stop starring at mine
(Me) You're like me, always moving, looking for something
(You) Just don't hurt me, I've been hurt too many times

Me and you become real
While the world around us becomes unreal

(Me) Let me guess you think I'm crazy don't you
(You) Not really, maybe you're just as lost as me
(Me) I'm not crazy not by the definition of the word
(You) We're just random, scatterbrained creatures aren't we

We are in the middle of it
Our lies are shared and we have the same secrets

(You) I couldn't sleep either, never can
(You) I'd think that you'd be bothered by it
(Me) Needless to say, yes I am
(Me) But it doesn't stop me from dreaming, does it?

Me and you we begin to feel
While the entire world quickly turns surreal

(Me) I always dream of this huge wall, With a blind girl behind it.
(You) So let me guess you think that blind girl is me?
(Me) And there's just one door but its kept locked
(Me) No, I just believe that you're the one who has the key

We start our dialogs
Things I've always thought but never dared to say it

(You) You're binding me with silence, maybe I'm just rambling
(You) I never needed to ramble, I just do it because I enjoy it
(You) See, I can't stop once I start. Are you still listening?
(Me) Sorry, your eyes are dancing again, I enjoy it

Me and you become real
While the world around us becomes unreal

(You) You made me feel guilty for getting us off track
(Me) Guilty? The worst things in life don't feel guilty for what they do
(You) Does a bullet feel guilty when it flies through the air?
(Me) Of course not, but who's the bullet here, me or you?

We still haven't said a word...

Copyright © heartquake ... [ 2005-03-31 13:20:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: The Look (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 05:45:30 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

a little trite at times, but other than that this is really sincere.

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com