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The Last Winter Leaf
Contributed by
enjoiskating6
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Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:44:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm that final leaf still gripping the bark,
In winter's crisp cold and elongated dark,
Holding to hope that spring takes a breath,
and blows away the loneliness that created death,
Blood red I shine through the wakening sun,
still holding strong I prove i'm not done,
Refusing to part and submit to the floor,
Seeing ahead I can live for much more,
I braced last winter to the ecstasy of you,
A friend by my side together we grew,
But a storm ripped us apart and cast you away,
beside a dying leaf where i watch you decay,
But for spring I hold on to the hope of new growth,
I swore on my life and won't break my oath,
I struggled but learned and now pray for the chance,
That you might grow back and we last in romance.
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enjoiskating6
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2005-03-31 10:44:42]
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Re: The Last Winter Leaf
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by pixie on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:46:12 AM AEST
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very emotional and deep write
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Re: The Last Winter Leaf
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by alexb on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:47:12 AM AEST
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| your poem has some of the best rhymes i have ever read, and it was very sincere and touching. great write |
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Re: The Last Winter Leaf
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:11:17 AM AEST
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Wow very cleverly done!
Great rhyme and flows nice.
Great job on this! |
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Re: The Last Winter Leaf
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by Amanda_Interrupted on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:25:30 PM AEST
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| I enjoyed this a lot. Great write. |
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Re: The Last Winter Leaf
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by sick_n_twisted on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:59:04 PM AEST
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| good write its so touching i really loved it i dont know what i'd do if that happened.i like the rhymes there really good later' great write. |
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