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Nakita
Contributed by
Rakerman1999
on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 01:12:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Grant me now thy feathered kiss Nakita
Let my lips join eagerly with thine
For a thousand lifetimes I have waited
Breathlessly for our tongues to entwine
Ageless is the love that holds me captive
Countless are the nights that I have dreamed
Constant as the northern star this feeling
Nakita, just one touch and I'm redeemed
On the wings of evermore Nakita
Soaring through the vast unending skies
Past a million points of light a dancin'
Far beyond the sight of mortal eyes
There within the darkness I am calling
Hear my voice like thunder of the sea
Promising the lonely days are over
Oh Nakita, give your heart to me.
Copyright ©
Rakerman1999
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2005-03-31 01:12:06]
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Re: Nakita
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:50:16 AM AEST
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That is poetry !!! There is nothing else to say.
I enjoyed reading this immensely.
Nazzy ~
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Re: Nakita
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 06:52:33 AM AEST
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Oh Larry this was just beautiful, nothing more to say really. This was just wow!!!
Jane x |
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Re: Nakita
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by pixie on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:03:49 AM AEST
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very beautifully written, lovely words
pix xx |
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Re: Nakita
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:30:11 AM AEST
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He's Alive!!!!!
Welcome home, Larry.....
I see you've found 'it'.....once again..
Jenni |
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Re: Nakita
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by Kie on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 08:09:27 AM AEST
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Now you have me hearing the song "Oh Nikita is it cold, in your little corner of the world"
I am thrilled, ecstatic, giddy and SMILING that you are posting again.
Beautiful, beautiful poem.
K- |
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Re: Nakita
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:06:04 AM AEST
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| Beautiful lines, you are back indeed! |
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Re: Nakita
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 09:43:36 AM AEST
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*smiles*
It's good to see you back Larry, I have seriously missed your poetry
(Stitch was sending snippets now and then, though. lol)
This is gorgeous, I especially love that first stanza, it is incredible.
Great write Larry,
Welcome back,
Phil |
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Re: Nakita
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by DorianChambers on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 12:00:42 AM AEST
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LOVE THE THAT NAME AND THE POEM
SPEAKS 4 IT SELF GREAT WORK . . .
DORIAN CHAMBERS |
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Re: Nakita
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 12:37:05 AM AEST
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(((((((larry))))))) welcome home:) this is truely beautiful, flowing and dreamy, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Nakita
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 5th May 2005 @ 10:54:04 PM AEST
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Wow such beautiful poetry contained within
these two stanzas it is almost mind-boggling.
I am not sure who Nakita is (your wife
maybe?), but she sounds like an amazing
girl. The second to last line really stood out to
me as I am wating for these "lonely days" to
be over. I am glad I read this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Nakita
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by needledancing on
Sunday, 1st April 2007 @ 08:05:11 AM AEST
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Fantastic piece. To speak to the universe and love the galaxy that spreads before us and write passion and longing for your
(star/angel) Nakita..such incredible talent. |
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