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Fate
Contributed by
x0x_lorlor
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:55:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Fate
Tears streamed down her face
As she tried hard not to cry
Her heart slowly shattered
As she looked deep into his eyes
The hurt was unbearable
The pain she could not hide
The secluded feelings
Buried deep inside
Reminiscing the day
The day that she would never forget
Along the path of fate
Came two lovers that met
They were destined for each other
They felt it in their hearts
It was true love
They knew it from the start
The first page was written
Their love story was born
Never wishing to end
A relationship was formed
But as time passed
Fate let them slip apart
The life they once knew
Had vanished in the dark
The promises of devotion
Became nothing but lies
Slowly like a rose
Their love began to die
As she now stands still, motionless
Still reminiscing the very day it had all begun
When he first walked into her life
And thought she had found her special one
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x0x_lorlor
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2005-03-30 23:55:26]
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Re: Fate
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by russ-dawg on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:36:31 AM AEST
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| that is one of the greatest poems i have ever read it was so good it brought a tear to my eye keep up the great work |
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Re: Fate
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by Andi21 on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:24:04 AM AEST
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| I love it! I am going through some stupid crap like that now.. so it really touched me! Keep it up! |
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Re: Fate
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by pixie on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:04:50 AM AEST
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written so well, emotionally deep,
pix xx |
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