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My Love
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:05:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Piercing my heart
Rekendling the flame inside
If ever did we part
Forever I would cry
Uncreating the hurt
That has replayed in my mind
Living without effort
As these are the days I wish to never rewind
As you are now my life
And everthing else is behind
I think about you day and night
In my dreams, your face entwined
Nothing else matters to me
As you are my everything
Without you would be misery
And my tears would be glistening
My love for you is always
And I wish for you to know
Even when the words I do not say
My love for you is more then I can say, or show
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ForeverAlone
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2005-03-30 23:05:27]
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Re: My Love
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by x0x_lorlor on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:58:19 PM AEST
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| that's really deep! good job! |
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Re: My Love
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by bloomingrose_bud on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 12:12:26 AM AEST
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| I really like your poem it is very heart touching. I rate it a 4 |
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Re: My Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:49:01 AM AEST
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wow this is beautiful.. I always like your poems.. you can feel the love from this.. great job
JENNI |
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Re: My Love
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by pixie on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:05:18 AM AEST
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sensual and moving, a lovely write,
pix xx |
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Re: My Love
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:09:11 PM AEST
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| i wrote my love poem march 28th, so i might have had the title first! you just posted yours first. i rather liked this, but love is a fickle thing that i have yet to see all sides of yet. afterall broken peices offer more sides to see than a whole. |
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