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Dream Land

Contributed by Faust on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

If you were to look inot my dreams, you would learn much about the confines of my soul. You might even be lucky to discover a hidden goal, but when you leave you would have a different point of view. So instead I think I'll just describe it to you. At first glance it may look like this land is filled with nothing but a happy thought, or that in this land there is no fraught. If you were to wake up now that is all you would know, but unfortunatley it is not so. After a few momemts in this strange land, you would see there is evil at hand. Suddenly all that is calm is engulfed with fire, and your content little self is now filled with desire. As imps and demons appear from the ground, gut wrenching screams is the only sound. As soon as they begin to make you scream, you may be strickin by a bright sunbeam. You also may be pale in the face, but atleast you are not stuck in this evil hellish place.

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Re: Dream Land (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:52:21 PM AEST
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Hmm, I think I like this. Alternate realities to describe the real world. I have to think about that. (There is a lot going on in your poem, that is a good thing)

Re: Dream Land (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:18:19 PM AEST
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i like this a lot, it can also describe ppl, in a way. The masks ppl use to cover the real them up, or just the secrets they keep. Not all is perfect in this world, Great write.

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