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Bloody Tears
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:36:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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softly, slowly the tears fall down,
they gather quickly on the ground,
some are big and some are small,
theres too many to count them all,
some have a reason, some are just there,
most are for those who do not care,
all of this pain that she is in,
she hides from them with smiles and a grin,
no one knows her secret fight,
she battles with a razor everynight,
every so often her scars will show,
but how they got there only she knows,
by the time someone finds her final fate,
only she knows it will be too late
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Re: Bloody Tears
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by unrestrained19 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:44:48 PM AEST
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i wanted you to know that i could relate to this poem personally...i really loved it...a lot i have a favorite line if you want to know (i guess either way i am going to tell you)
no one knows her secret fight,
she battles with a razor everynight,
every so often her scars will show,
but how they got there only she knows,
keep writing please!!!!! |
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Re: Bloody Tears
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by hotrod55 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:45:36 PM AEST
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| wow.... all i can say is wow Great job |
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Re: Bloody Tears
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by Sir_Odd87 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 08:01:23 PM AEST
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| I think I'd have to agree... wow |
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Re: Bloody Tears
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by Andi21 on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:30:43 AM AEST
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me too... wow.
it is really great. not too long, yet i still feel your pain! Great job! |
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Re: Bloody Tears
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by brokengirl on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 02:15:06 PM AEST
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I can relate to this poem. Very powerful and good. Hope everything is allright
*hug*
-hailey |
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