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I Just Want to Live
Contributed by
humboldtsweetie33
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:22:49 PM in AEST
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I want the world to stop turning,
I want it all to end,
I want everything and everyone to stop and leave,
I want my innocence back,
I want the feeling of happiness to come and take me away,
I want to feel joy and excitement all over again,
I dont want to be lost in depression and darkness anymore,
I want to come out of the shadows and back into the light,
I'm tired of being pill reliant,
I'm tired of being razor dependent,
I just want my fairytale ending,
where I can finally say that I lived happily ever after without having to lie to myself,
I just want some kind of stability,
some kid of controll over myself,
I just want to be ok,
I just want live the way I was meant to live,
there is no happy endings in my future
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Re: I Just Want to Live
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:28:21 PM AEST
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woah this is a very emotional piece and im liking it. i can relate to the things you wish and the longing for happiness and wanting to be ok.
its sad but still kinda hopeful.....well done
all my hope rach x |
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Re: I Just Want to Live
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:38:41 PM AEST
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| You said that you have'nt written since January...You say in your poem , " I want to come out of the shadows and back into the light " .Great that you crossed that bridge and that you are writing again!Keep writing... |
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Re: I Just Want to Live
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by unrestrained19 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:39:31 PM AEST
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wow this one touched me speechless!!!!!
my favorite lines:
I want to come out of the shadows and back into the light,
I'm tired of being pill reliant,
I'm tired of being razor dependent,
I just want my fairytale ending,
where I can finally say that I lived happily ever after without having to lie to myself,
excellent glad you got some inspiration...please keep going!!!!!! |
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Re: I Just Want to Live
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by high_on_duct_tape on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 06:41:12 PM AEST
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| this is ur best poem i've read, which means it's great! I feel exactly the same way. |
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