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I Miss... You
Contributed by
gabby521
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:23:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I miss the laughter in your eyes
I miss the way you held me tight
I miss the sunrise in your hair
I miss your comfort when I'm scared
I miss the way you looked at me
I miss thinking that we'll always be
And words cannot express how I miss
Ev'ry moment spent lost in your kiss
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Re: I Miss... You
(User Rating: 1 ) by ChichiriFreak on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:34:42 PM AEST (User
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Sweet and simple. ^_^ love this. keep up the good work! |
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Re: I Miss... You
(User Rating: 1 ) by Overstated on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:35:10 PM AEST (User
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simple but effective in content
found myself relating to this piece of work so you must of done somthing right!
good work |
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Re: I Miss... You
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:17:05 PM AEST (User
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awwww i can really relate to this...and i thawt of someone and made me sad in a way.
but great poetry and the emotions run high.
good on ya |
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Re: I Miss... You
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:10:40 AM AEST (User
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short and sweet, you can feel your love for this person in your write,
pix xx |
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