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my room
Contributed by
brokengirl
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 04:28:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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As I lay here in bed
All I think of is you.
I close my eyes and picture you
Creeping into my room unsuspected.
But I know you’re there
You are always there
You always come.
I open my eyes before my imagination gets away from me
But I see you staring back at me
I try to scream but you cover my mouth so no one can hear.
I know the routine
You’ll do what you do then leave until the next night
I try to pretend I’m not scared
As the tears run down my cheeks.
I pray to God for it to be over
For you to just leave me alone
But still you come
Every night
To my room.
Copyright ©
brokengirl
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2005-03-30 16:28:16]
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Re: my room
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by ForeverAlone on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:10:39 PM AEST
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You use a unique structure and rythme...I like it...the poem is dark...the power is felt and I hope all is okay in your life.
Clark |
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Re: my room
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by Ninnyfarfar on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 08:26:30 AM AEST
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that takes a lot of courage to write, i know how you feel, hopefully it is all over for you now. keep up the good writing!
Ninny=) |
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Re: my room
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by Stonedraider23 on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 12:06:22 AM AEST
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| great write i still hate the way ppl say "they know how it feels" when they dont or they can "relate" i just read that n im like yea whateva but thats me i dont know how it feels and i cant relate anyway good write |
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Re: my room
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 03:06:45 AM AEST
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The place you should have as a haven, a rest, is nothing but a nightmare.
I'm sorry, if this is you. I am. If not, you scared me.
Take care,
David |
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