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Numeretic
Contributed by
Damon_Maynard
on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 02:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Use two backpacks to pin me back back,
Severity left 3 legged and race in sack sack.
Mouse dangers got the taunt taunt for green back,
One stern word parade, been there there done that.
I知 almost I know free speak show and let go,
Not silky low low tonic clamber flow flow.
Shave shave a dull day dimmer now that痴 a no no,
Climatic tyrant tyrant is good to go go.
I知 missing and
I知 hitting and
I知 getting so
Ready ready.
And I wish, I wish, I wish, I wish,
That this sordid gift could just lift through mist.
And I bring to this, and I値l bring to Mister,
Help me drop rock rocks, scale Richter.
I bought you freedom, free dumb and wood sticks,
Pass pass me half half of steel stain bricks.
One two three four five six, six,
Prime number dumber and I知 left with this.
I知 missing and
I知 hitting and
I知 getting so
Ready ready.
Timid timid sent to bring it, sifted,
Went to castle and ban lifted lifted.
Specific screen, hello hello and halo fourteen,
To keep them play play just keep them clean.
Cargo cargo full with holes holes,
Asked or expected to cold the troll trolls.
Who痴 there, who痴 left to pay pay my bail,
Undone livid rivets shift pent up snail snail.
I知 missing and
I知 hitting and
I知 getting so
Ready ready.
Reeds reeds a tick tock tick tock dancy ticks,
Stop stop with your leaned on fancy mix.
Game game too hard hard the difficulty,
To shape too late sold out out unity.
Blue light the sent and labeled horn horn,
Pie graph, pie nap and sea kelp torn torn.
Someone careless left left behind,
How hard hard is it to hold on to time?
I知 missing and
I知 hitting and
I知 getting so
Ready ready.
Copyright ﾂｩ
Damon_Maynard
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2002-12-20 14:40:00]
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Re: Numeretic
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 02:43:41 PM AEST
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I got some lyrical senses out of this one....it's definately different and has it's own style....it's unique...thanks for sharing this one...i enjoyed it..
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Re: Numeretic
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by Daniel on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 04:05:00 PM AEST
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"I?m missing and I?m hitting and I?m getting so Ready ready" sounds like where is everybody from NIN...
maybe that's just me. i like the repeating words in the mix, it adds rythm to it all, gives character too!! rocking damon!! kudos! ;0)
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