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Her
Contributed by
xoxpaperxheartxox
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:59:44 PM in AEST
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Drawn with a blade
Always on my wrist
Are her initials
Drawn with a twist
I loved her
Felt it the first time we kissed
I wish i could be with her forever
Shes the first and the only on my list
But no her initials will scar me forever
Drawn with a blade
Always on my wrist
Copyright ©
xoxpaperxheartxox
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2005-03-30 13:59:44]
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Re: Her
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by dragonfly1979 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:39:31 PM AEST
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makes it very clear why first loves are sometimes the only ones ever worth remembering....well written
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Re: Her
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:45:59 PM AEST
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great writing... sad yet well written. great emotion and figurative language me likey!!! im gonna read it again now...
luv n hugs,
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Re: Her
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by xXcrossedXx on
Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 10:36:02 AM AEST
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Beautiful write! I loved it!
xoxo
--amanda-- |
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