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Immortal Suicide Child

Contributed by dvsnme816 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:13:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I am so anxious to die I am counting the hours till the end of time,
I look up trying to get liberated with bloody tears in my eyes,
feeling lonely everyday and night-but I was popular with many friends,
sometimes I wanna keep running from fate but its always a step ahead,
because I feel my life has so much tension-its about to break to pieces,
death keeps me wondering if I was put on earth for this reason,
Im holding my breath till I become god's lamb of sacrifice,
no more pain with god by my side in the after life,
people wonder who I am-so many changes I forgot who I am,
I am holding my breath till I see my only chance at amnesty,
a weathered body that nobody would miss by such a tragedy,
all the times I cried and no one ever heard my plead,
Im tired of covering it up-theres no enough visine,
nobody would talk to me because I am different,
my life has been painful-so I would rather die instant,
people try to read me like a book and turn me inside out,
all I can tell them is-I dont wanna die right now...

Copyright © dvsnme816 ... [ 2005-03-30 13:13:00]
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Re: Immortal Suicide Child (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 04:34:35 PM AEST
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wow Alex this is a thought provoking dark piece of poetry. Excellently written and the image u cast in the readers head is of a darkened sad heart. Well done. A truly superb poem.
Hugs,
Sue

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