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Timeless
Contributed by
ScreenSaver77
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:28:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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You know, when I miss you so much
I gently squint my eyes, tardily it will deepen into an elated eventide
My inner being weiglessly floats towards the upper pinnacle
Drifting into no-man's-land
Here I discovered: no bugaboos, no dwelling, and my inner piece
The further I depart, the more enigmas’ seems to melt away
Gravity's trying to reel me in, but ’I'm steering this ship now
No atmosphere shall be 'my fortress
It's a whole new world out here
It's the biggest audience 'I have ever seen
Look! there's Jupiter, there's mars
The sun, the moon, even the stars
Wait a second; the moon's not made of cheese
Hey! what's that?? I don't believe
It's Neil, he's waving
What's ‘he doing there?
Well, never mind, friendly fellow though
Sometimes my mind gets victimized by deceit; this place is powerful, fear??
Maybe
I'm free, I'm truly free, and no one can trammel me now
Time is not the issue here; the real world is light years away
Beep - Beep
My watch, oh poop, I'm late for work!!
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2005-03-30 12:28:01]
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Re: Timeless
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:34:29 PM AEST
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hehe great write,well written and very creative
pix xx |
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Re: Timeless
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 02:59:21 PM AEST
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| VERY GOOD. I LIKE THE WAY YOU USE YOUR WORDS |
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Re: Timeless
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by THUGGIN4REAL on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 01:47:58 PM AEST
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| good write,i was feeling this,nice choice of words |
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