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Good-Bye
Contributed by
addicted2selfharm
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:44:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Staring at the ceiling.
My heart bleeding because of you.
Crying into my pillow alone.
Scared and hurt; nothing I can do.
I take a moment to glance at our picture.
And then hurl it against the wall.
My tears of blood and thoughts of you.
Let me know you can't hear my call.
On the floor, now crying because of you.
My eyes are red and hazy.
I need to get you out of my head.
My heart starts to thump like crazy.
I know you'll see my lifeless body.
When you go to open my door.
Razorblades and a broken picture.
Lay beside me on the floor.
All the time I spent with you.
And all the love that I shared.
Cannot bring me from my sleep.
Now do you wish you cared?
Reaching for the razorblade.
I now know what I must do.
It's the only way to clear my head.
My final good-bye to you...
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Re: Good-Bye
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:57:06 AM AEST
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thats so sad... much emotion put into this... yet i can relate to it, when my bf recently broke up with me all i wanted was to die. i slit my wrists and was all set to go... but something stopped me, and that was hope in something better. i hope you can find this same hope that will help you to continue on.
luv n hugs
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Re: Good-Bye
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:57:14 AM AEST
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sad and deeply written, your pain was so prominant in this poem,*hugs*
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Re: Good-Bye
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:19:45 PM AEST
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| Very powerful and heart breaking. Thanks much for sharing. |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:06:10 PM AEST
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Oh this awful, so sad..
I have felt this before, but I haven't cut. I hope you feel better soon.
A good write, good flow and a lot of emotion.
Phil |
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Re: Good-Bye
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by dragonfly1979 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:45:03 PM AEST
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| sometimes people have a way of getting into our heads and messing things up in there. Never fear...it WILL get better...my heart goes out to you |
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