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world of joy

Contributed by hirday on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:06:59 AM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

THEY FOUGHT VERY HARD
IN THOSE DEADLY CONDITIONS
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

THEY FACED THE SITUATION
AND HANDLED THE SITUATION
STOOD UP AND TALL WITHOUT HESITATION
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

THERE EYES SAW THE STORM OF HUNGER
THERE ONLY SENSE WAS SENSE OF POVERTY
THEY TREATED THERE HUT AS KINGS MANSION
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

BUT STILL IN SOME SITUATION
THEY HAVE TO GIVE UP
GIVEUP TO THE AWKWARD CONDITION
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

SOME SOLD THEIR CHILD
SOME SOLD THERE BONES
SOME SOLD THERE SOUL
BUT ONLY TO SURVIVE THE STARVATION
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

FOR THEM DISEASE ARE NATURAL DISATER
SWALLOWED FACES ARE PIECES OF MASTER
STILL THEY CARRIED THAT INCALCULABLE OPTIMISM
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

THEY ARE STILL FIGHTING
THERE HOPES ARE STILL ALIVE
THEIR HAPPINESS IS IN THEIR LOUGHING CHILDREN
THEY STIILL THINK THEY CAN BEAT THE SITUATION
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

THEIR ONLY LUXURY IS LOVE AT NIGHT
THEY THINK THAT THEIR FUTURE IS BRIGHT
THEY WANT TO REACH THERE DESTINATION
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

BROTHERHOOD IS AMONG ALL OF THEM
THEY SOBBED TOGETHER
THEY LAUGHED TOGETHER
ALL OF THEM ARE INTEGRATED
WHOLE SLUM IS FORMED AS A NATION
AS IF THEY ARE
GODS ULTIMATE CREATION

Copyright © hirday ... [ 2005-03-30 10:06:59]
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Re: world of joy (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 05:29:09 PM AEST
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u shouldve called it -Ultimate creation-!!

it is a really nice poem. reflective i must say.

keep up the work

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