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until my last breath
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 08:56:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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til darkness falls
pain is all
but i shall fight
until my last breath
ive coped so far
darkness held my hand
now the angel of light
she is here to gide me
and iam here to fight
against the creatures of the night
the wall of hell has split
they run along beside me
they hiss and spit
i realise darkness has fallen
paradise is lost
the key swallowed by death
until my last breath
i shall fight
i will stand
i want to live
i want to breathe
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2005-03-30 08:56:46]
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Re: until my last breath
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by greyshadow on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:03:22 AM AEST
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I like how you took a simple topic and made it so powerful "against the creatures of the night
the wall of hell has split
they run along beside me
they hiss and spit"
Very nice description. |
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Re: until my last breath
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by blackholesun on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:32:40 PM AEST
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| its good i really liked it ,im a fighter too,but if u havent noticed we must all get knocked down before we can have the strenghth to get up,all things happen for a reason ,sounds like something happened and u got back up again its really inspirational i loved it |
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