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Why Do You Make Her Cry?!?!?!?
Contributed by
adamsbabygurlie
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 08:56:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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why can't it all stop
why can't it go away
I really wish it would
Daddy, do you want to stay
I love them both so much
but does he still love my mother
or is he lying when he says he does
and he only loves me, my sister and my brother
I wish it would be okay
and I wish I didn't have to cry
just thinking about
if daddy decides to say good-bye
I know this isn't my fault
I just want to make it okay
for my sister and me
I wish daddy means what he says
when he says he loves her
but he didn't look me in my eyes
I'm starting to think
everything he says is a bunch of lies
so daddy are you telling me
the truth and not a lie
cause if you are
why do you still make mama cry
she loves you very much
and so do I
but if you don't love her anymore
you need to tell her instead of lie
I don't know what to think
or if I should even understand
why can't I just see
you hold mama's hand
and tell her you love her
but I don't know if you really do
I'm sorry daddy
but I love mama and you too
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2005-03-30 08:56:00]
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Re: Why Do You Make Her Cry?!?!?!?
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:15:08 AM AEST
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| Well written. the rhyming is well kept as well. My parents went through the same thing, so i can relate to this. Nice write. |
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Re: Why Do You Make Her Cry?!?!?!?
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by blue_angel on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:24:59 AM AEST
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im so sorry for what you have to go through. i cant say i can relate but having read your poem, i can just picture how you feel, it's that strong. great job, hope everything works out for you and your family,
with love
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