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***Glitter & Gasoline***
Contributed by
Rxqueen
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Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 04:39:36 AM in AEST
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glitter and gasoline
dance all night beauty queen
you are glitter and gasoline
you sparkle and shine
but will never be mine
that's where the fuel comes to play
you burn inside everyday
I see you smile at all the boys
like they are cute lil toys
talk like you are so satisfied
you have nothing been denied
so spoiled rotton to the core
but baby, you are just a bore
walk and talk with pretend grace
paint that makeup on your face
(a mask to hide
what lives inside)
but deep down I see
the swelling agony
glitter and gasoline
you are an attention feind
no one wants more than a quickiey
no one will take you home to meet mommy
you are worn and tattered to the bone
all you know is to how be alone
glitter and gasoline...
a used up drama queen
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Rxqueen
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by greyshadow on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 04:45:09 AM AEST
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| I like the analogy of glitter and gasoline. If im correct in interpretation this poem is easy to relate to as far as relationships and women. |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:25:27 AM AEST
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| i like this poem...its unique and a clever write |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:54:57 AM AEST
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This is stunning Jocelyn. Wow.
I adore this:
"walk and talk with pretend grace
paint that makeup on your face
(a mask to hide
what lives inside)
but deep down I see
the swelling agony
glitter and gasoline
you are an attention feind"
Gosh, that's so sad...
I love how this seems to rhyme, but it doesn't, not really, it just flows that way.
Brilliant write hun,
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:49:23 AM AEST
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Oh thats a cool write, very discriptive and powerful showing a lot of emotions. I liked it
walk and talk with pretend grace
paint that makeup on your face
(a mask to hide
what lives inside)
but deep down I see
the swelling agony
glitter and gasoline
you are an attention feind
I love that lines the best, good work Joce.
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by Inter on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:46:46 AM AEST
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| You've hit on a very memorable title there which really sums up the subject. |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 10:08:19 AM AEST
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Wow..that's telling 'em, grrl... Deep write
Jenni |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:14:44 AM AEST
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a very clever and creative write, loved this Joce,
pix xx |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by guts_n_glitter on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:15:11 PM AEST
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great poem
.-.x.-. |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:04:49 PM AEST
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I like your writing more and more
with each poem
to remind me
of how cool your stuff is.
You shine,
Glitter-girl.
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by DorianChambers on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 08:56:33 PM AEST
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A most gracious poem defining one who is
on the brink of self discovery time is of the
essence, and it is on your side . . .
Dorian Chambers |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 08:56:01 AM AEST
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| awww Joc, wonderfully written piece, but oh so tragic!! |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by fielding88 on
Friday, 1st April 2005 @ 05:32:35 PM AEST
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| How unique, what a comparison. You really made it work to your advantage too, i was really taken away by what u said about makeup though, which just seems like the obvious answer so many seem to overlook. You really spoke about the subject matter, emotions were high by the end of the write, very impressive stuff great work! |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by UnlovedChild on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 02:00:56 AM AEST
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| This poem is so good Joce. It's unique in many ways. So emotional and deep, yet beautiful and touching. Amazingly descriptive, and very nicely worded. Excellent job. |
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by freckle on
Monday, 4th April 2005 @ 09:00:08 PM AEST
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Good write Joce. You can definately feel the pain....I really liked how you mixed the glitter and gasoline and described each in her....I was almost shocked though, thought you were gonna use another word instead of "bore".....anyway, life gets better, it really, really does...I think you'll have fun living in Paradise....
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 5th April 2005 @ 06:43:36 AM AEST
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Within this catchy title lives a story of tragedy and pretence beauty.
A dangerous liaison…is glitter and gasoline.
Deceiving at first, yet once entrapped, there is no turning away…
A seductive piece.
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 09:10:43 PM AEST
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beautifully written with such a sense of
despair. I loved this but I can't really say why I
loved it or what i loved about it.
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Re: ***Glitter & Gasoline***
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by remote on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 12:33:39 PM AEST
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| Unless it's introspective work, the person for whom this is intended seems to be more than important enough to write a poetry about. |
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