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Dispossessed
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 02:37:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I do not fear you
Nor pay I heed
To your pompous accusations
Your grandiose proclamations
Self-effacing acclamations
You have no power here
You have no control
Nothing to behold
No Midas touch of gold
You believe your words empower you
If you put me down I値l cower too
Not so confident now, are you ?
I値l not falter from my course
Scream your lies, your voice grows hoarse
To you I am an unseen force
And you will never change me
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I do not hear you
Nor do I need
Your endless negativity
Hollow heartless gratuity
There never was a you and me
Time to face your biggest fear
Drown in your attack
Take your promise back
I am everything you lack
I値l be no longer your free ride
Your outside view from the inside
You see now my forgotten pride
It was here within me all along
I took your hand you led me wrong
And now you see I am that strong
Your presence enrages me
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I am not dear to you
Nor have I ever been
Perhaps I may have once believed
Notions that you preconceived
Your stranglehold has been relieved
I know you won稚 shed a tear
Another soul you値l find
More dreams for you to bind
Twist some other mind
At the tolling of the bell
I cast you back within the well
Send you into your self-made hell
You exist, a parasite
Bark much weaker than your bite
Slink away into the night
Get thee hence from me
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Copyright ﾂｩ
Nazmythian
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Re: Dispossessed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 02:41:01 AM AEST
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a very thought provoking, strong masterpeice.
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Re: Dispossessed
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 02:44:29 AM AEST
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I say one of your great masterpiece here.
another awsome write Nazzy |
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Re: Dispossessed
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by Rxqueen on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:19:56 AM AEST
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God your good, lol. This was so powerful I could feel your words. You are a very talented writer. You hooked me in the beginning and left me craving more. Great job. I ecspecially liked :
"You believe your words empower you
If you put me down I値l cower too"
"I値l be no longer your free ride
Your outside view from the inside
You see now my forgotten pride"
"You exist, a parasite
Bark much weaker than your bite
Slink away into the night"
Kick a$$!!! Loves it!!!
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Re: Dispossessed
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:32:33 AM AEST
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My heart was goin 'bang, bang, bang' all through this.
This is...disurbing...
Are you OK?
I like this a lot, it's a slight bit different to your your usual writes, is it not?
And like I said, this really is disturbing, a little dark, too.
Great write,
Phil |
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Re: Dispossessed
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 06:03:00 AM AEST
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| i only echo everyone elses comments. very, very good. |
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Re: Dispossessed
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 08:41:45 AM AEST
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WOW!!! that's just bursting with emotions and thoughts. It's dark and powerfull, it's a amzing write.
Are you ok tho? This was just overwhelming to read, hopefully you're ok.
Great write as always Scott
Jane |
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Re: Dispossessed
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 11:15:58 AM AEST
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a very strong and very intresting write,
pix xx |
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Re: Dispossessed
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by brokengirl on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:57:04 PM AEST
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| great write. I like the word choice and rhyming...I think it works well. good job. |
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Re: Dispossessed
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by critterhideaway on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 09:20:23 PM AEST
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| Very good words!!! And very true in my mind, Thank you for this one! |
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Re: Dispossessed
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by bernard on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:07:06 AM AEST
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| Strong tobac indeed I hope it cleaned your system of some pretty bad poisons Naz. Thanks for your comments all the best from bernard. |
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Re: Dispossessed
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 04:58:34 PM AEST
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The start reminded me of The Wrath of One
"I do not fear you
so buckle your armor"
Very powerful words, Naz...
You are like a fearsome mage here.
This would make Crowley's knees buckle.
One must wonder in fear
to whom it is addressed to.
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Re: Dispossessed
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by Willofree on
Saturday, 2nd April 2005 @ 06:03:12 PM AEST
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Naz,
Perhaps this could be called an exorcism. As if you have been pruged of demons. It, again, is a very powerful write. The force and tenacity of anger and determination that bellows within the lines is colossal.
Another vivid portrayal
Great write, thanks for sharing my friend
Willofree, Terry
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