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The Misery: Drink and Drived
Contributed by
thepos
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:57:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The Misery: Drink and Drived
I feel upon me,
The shadow of death.
It fills the air with fear,
It takes away my breath.
The screetching of tires,
The feeling of fear.
Gave me a hint,
Death was near.
Exploding glass,
The screaming of shock.
I felt nothing but pain,
As I fell like a rock.
Both cars stop,
A feeling of hell.
I went to check,
If they were well.
I looked at the driver,
Blood on his face.
He did not survive,
This terrible place.
Back seat was a child,
No older than three.
Her life is no more,
All because of me.
I fell to my nees.
I fell to the ground.
I saw the ambulance,
As it came around.
A three year old girl,
Died because I drank.
She has no more life,
And just me to thank.
With tears in her eyes,
The mother arrived.
Horror on her face,
Becaue I drank and drived.
She ran towards the car,
She ran through me instead.
Then I finaly realized,
That I am dead.
I can't tell her what happened,
I can't go home and see my wife.
All because I drank and drived,
I just ended my life.
--Evan L.--
more of my poetry at: http://thepoemsofsorrow.com
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Re: The Misery: Drink and Drived
(User Rating: 1 ) by freckle on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:19:23 PM AEST (User
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The poem is good....it reminds me of another one told by a teenager's view point. Good write though and of course we can never hear the don't drink and drive message enough! Thanks for sharing.
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Re: The Misery: Drink and Drived
(User Rating: 1 ) by dragonfly1979 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:14:44 AM AEST (User
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I think maybe there are a lot of people out there that should read this. Very raw and to the point. |
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