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Old Woman
Contributed by
gequetscht
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Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 12:20:00 PM in AEST
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She sits by the water
She always keeps it still
Raked with a fan kept always beside her
For my own self indulgence
I cast a stone into the water
And whatch it move in circles
The old one looks sadly at me
She is so dissapointed
She gets up
And sweeps the water still again
There is lif in her old hands yet
I look at her
With tears in my face
As she sits back down
The sadness took away all of her senses
A Lonely animal
She said before she died
If the water is still
You will see
And i picked up her fan
And swept the water still
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Re: Old Woman
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 01:03:32 PM AEST
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Very deep emotional write....with beautiful visions....thanks for sharing this one...
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Re: Old Woman
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by thorns on
Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 02:58:47 AM AEST
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| invokes a deep and quiet sadness. |
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