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Age
Contributed by
freckle
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Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:34:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Age is just a state of mind
The child plays within
Growing up is
getting taller
staying up late
and crossing the street alone.
Copyright ©
freckle
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2005-03-29 18:34:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by DorianChambers on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:30:46 PM AEST (User
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clever write nice poetry, hummm do i agree, NO! LOL easy 4 u 2 say , wait till u get my age suddenly u dont count, 4 anything and u become invisable, as 4 the mind? that i lost
long time ago lol, beautiful little poem never the less . . .
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Re: Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by brokengirl on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:56:53 PM AEST (User
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interesting way to look at age....something to think about i guess....good write |
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Re: Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by UnlovedChild on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 12:46:31 AM AEST (User
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Short and simple, a wonderful write from the both of you. |
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Re: Age
(User Rating: 1 ) by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 03:32:59 PM AEST (User
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I shoulda seen this yesterday ..I caught a bus yesterday and bounded aboard with such enthusiasm and a big beaming smile that I startled the driver and made them laugh for about 5 minutes. I am growed up ... but I ain't growed old !!! Yay Carol !!!!
Nazzy ~ |
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