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Dear friend
Contributed by
reaven2004
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:07:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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We had fun today wouldnt you say,
we played and played and played all day,
We went to the park,
And we went to the beach,
Then we had a picnic and ate strawberries,chips,and then shared a peach,
We then read a book and shared a coke,
And then we went to climb the old white oak,
We sat there forever and told eachother our dreams,
You said you wanted to grow up and play on the Bears team,
Remember when you told me that your step daddy was a drunk,
Im sorry dear friend I should have never let you get in that truck,
You said you wanted to marry me when we grew old,
you said we would have lots of little kids of our own,
But stupid ole me didnt get the clue,
And I let you get into the truck and thats when your step daddy hurt you,
He yelled at you alot,
He said you were a punk,
But my dear friend You werent,
remember he was a stupid drunk,
When you told him no he lost his mind and thats when he took you and shot you out in the vine,
So remember dear friend that happy day that we shared,
Cause I know I will you cause you were the only one that ever cared.
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2005-03-29 18:07:58]
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Re: Dear friend
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by mina-1 on
Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 07:15:59 AM AEST
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A nice, but heart breaking twist to the end.
A very well expressed piece of poetry that touches the heart. I hope all is well.
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Re: Dear friend
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by coolbreeze17 on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 02:16:01 AM AEST
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| an emotional piece... |
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