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Hiding In Thought
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:07:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Contemplating suicide,
Having no place to hide.
My life is caving in,
I dont even know where to begin.
My wrists are bleeding,
The redness is misleading.
I know this isnt how it should be,
I know im not supposed to live this way;
With every slice I pay.
I have a confession...
This is more than I can bear,
And I really dont care;
If I continue on.
Will they notice im gone?
I curl up in this empty shell that is me,
And let myself bleed.
I swear im happy here,
And I want no one near.
I fear I might break,
An they'd see how I ache.
They'd see my pain,
They'd feel the rain.
So I contemplate suicide,
As a way to hide.
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Pats4eva7
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2005-03-29 17:07:27]
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Re: Hiding In Thought
(User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 05:19:48 PM AEST
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| I like this write. I am a cutter but for different reasons. I am sorry if you feel that way. You are never alone and if you think about suicide you can talk to me about it. I do like this poem allot though. |
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Re: Hiding In Thought
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by jeza on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 06:21:02 PM AEST
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| this is an emotional piece of writing however i would hate for you to go through with this. as a talented writer you shouldn't be wanting to waste your life |
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